Is this a good start please be truthful?

Question: Is this a good start please be truthful!?

THANK YOU
im sorry that i couldnt be there
that doesnt mean i dont care
cuz your someone special in my heart
and mentally well never be apart
so im not going to say goodbye
or that ill make me cry
at least more than now
i really hope you understand
i loved all the times we cherished
and all the smiles weve gianed together
and i just want to say
thank you for each and everydayWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It has a nice flow and the words are pretty but it's more like a song than a poem!. But it has something special good keep going!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

im sorry that i couldnt be there
that doesnt mean i dont care
cuz your someone special in my heart
and mentally well never be apart
so im not going to say goodbye
or that'll surely make me cry
at least more than i'm left with now !.
i really hope you understand
that i loved all the times we cherished
and all the smiles we weave together
and i just want to say
thank you for each and everyday

^ I editted somewhat !. (:
hope you like it !. !Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's very nice!. but the rhyming kinda gets weird towards the end!.
"at least more than now
i really hope you understand
i loved all the times we cherished
and all the smiles weve gianed together"

now and understand should rhyme, and so should cherished and together!. other than that, it's a good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com