Is this poem cheesy ?

Question: Is this poem cheesy !?

is this poem cheesy for a 13 year old girl to write

He caught my eye

He caught my eye,
I cant deny!.
When I saw him there,
He was almost to glorious to bear!.
His smile so bright,
His eyes golden and light!.
Oh, the sight, the sound, the thought of him!.
I can’t, I wont, say that I love him!.
The only thing that I wont deny
Is that he caught my eye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Well, I have to be honest!. It is cheesy!. But, I personally think your rhyme scheme is pretty effective, so you do have potential!. Plus, unlike other poems similar to this, I liked how you stated that you knew it wasn't love-unlike other very young poets who expresses in their poems that their infatuation is love!.:]Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it
freshly in love!?
Awh, it's adorable
Answer mine if you can please =]

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and yes it is is a tiny bit cheesy!?
But what's wrong with that!? At least it's not depressing like all my poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

a little, but that's love! lol, It's cute, and it perfectly desribes teen love!.

mine!?
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I like this very much - it is bright and cheerful - with a sunny approach!. I like your visuals of brightness!. The last line was exquisite!. Well done!. Keep up the good work!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is beginning poet typical fare!. TOO before glorious!. So how is junior high going!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it! it's a bit cheesy, but it's okay!
i like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Almost cheesecake!.!.!.but hey I love cheesecake!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I assume that you want an honest answer!. I think that that poem is a little cheesy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's alright, but the rhyming is distracting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No! And no one says 'Cheesy' anymore!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

hell yesWww@QuestionHome@Com

no i like it Www@QuestionHome@Com