What do you think of these 2 poem i wrote?

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The Unknown
I may never see tomorrow, there is no written guarantee!.
And things that happened yesterday belong to history!.
i cannot predict the future, I cannot change the past!.
I have just the present moment; i must treat it as my last!.

I must use this moment wisely, For it will soo fade away!.
And be lost to me forever, as part of yesterday!.
I must exercise compassion, help the fallen to their feet!.
Be a friend unto the friendless, make an empty life complete!.

The unkind thing I do today may never be undone!.
And friendships that I fail to win, may never more be won!.
I may not have another chance on bended knee to pray!.
And thank God with humble heart, for giving me this day!.

Thanks for taking you time to read my poem!.!.!. Please comment and critique!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

wow!!! that is a great poem!. you really have potensial!. can you please write more so i can read!. i think it's deep and means allot!. thank you, you made my day!! ;-} skietelsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, that realy cool!. I`m guessing your a Christian then!?
I think its about using the present time to make a difference, how ever small, in someone`s life by be friending them!.

Maby seeing we know things for sure without there being "a written guarantee" you shoul;d say " I may never see tomorrow, there is no guarantee"!. But thats my opinion!.
Its a proper poem like mine though, cause it rymes!. Well done, pretty good stuff!Www@QuestionHome@Com

that poem was beautiful, truly!. i dont usually care for poems that have a hardcore rhyming scheme because they tend to sound forced but urs was beautifully written!. I'm very impressed i really like it!.

"things that happened yesterday belong to history" my favorite line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A simple poem yet meaningful!. I admire the way you wrote it!. keep on writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com