Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> You ever feel like this?


Question: You ever feel like this!?
I need a break
All work and no play
There's much to do
Even in my slumber
The thoughts remain
I close my eyes
But not the mind
Sleep restless soul
Tomorrow will wait
Rest weary heart
Sail the ship of dreams
Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That's a copy Vitraux,
I feel you on that one, I get what I call message over-load, or what is more technically called "racing thoughts" I think is specifically apparent in creative people!.
I can't stop my mind, my body wears out long before my mind does!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Time Management and Sleep Hygiene

Better organization of wake and sleep time will alleviate a state of fatigue!. The weary sense of drudgery is a failure to apply common sense solutions to decisive planning of aspiration, goal, and responsibility!.

Take a Time Management class or seminar!. also explore Sleep Hygiene information and consider a class or seminar!. These resources will energize quality of wake and sleep hours!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excessive work
Physically drained
Mentally exhausted
Hard to stop to take a break
So much to do, so much to do
Is there time left to play!?
No I cannot stay
Still much to do, still much to do
Can no longer keep track
Am I coming or going!?
Damn, the yard even needs mowing
Oh my aching back
So tired and drained
Just a little time left to rest
Don't even feel like getting undressed
My mind and body completely strained
I need sleep, but how!?
Quit thinking so many thoughts
Did I remember to wash all the pots!?
Please may I find sleep now!?

;)
Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes right now as a matter of fact!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.


I need a break for it can not come to late!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
I close the door more work to take!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Tears fill my cheeks overloaded with work work and
and no mystique!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Take a break rest my soul for tomorrow begins a new day to unfold :)))
Sleep helps to refresh my soul to face another day of all work and no play but soon something changes a thought a smile to bring me hope to yet live another day :)))Www@QuestionHome@Com

And, I thought that I was alone with such thoughts and feelings!.
Nice to know that I'm not alone!.
Great poem!.
This is why we are told to take one day at a time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The tempo is very good, a breeze to read through!. The thoughts are simple and soothing!. Not bad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lot of people can relate
to your poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

definitely! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You wrote this about me, didn't you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

how well you know me Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh yes! and great poem I love it =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!.!.!.


!.!.!.but alas I am not as gifted with the prose as you are!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

of course,we all are tired of something afterwards!.!.!. nice poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow nice poem!
when i read this one i felt i m relaxing!.!. specialy the last line!.!.
which makes ur poem gr8!.Www@QuestionHome@Com