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Question: Another poem to think on!? Real Talk!?
Real Talk
Written by Semper Fi Reborn
Let down your walls
Get to know God
There's footprints in the sand
Seeds in sod
Grow with Him
Become a tree and bear fruit
Flow with Him
And watch tree grow strong roots
This is real talk
Real talk, yeah, I said it twice
Let your words be the clearest
And your motives be precise
I don't mince words
My God didn't make me to chop
He gave me a voice
Said talk real and don't stop
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Your poem says it truly as I've heard and seen it!. My God is plain spoken!. He has always dealt with me in straightforward fashion and seems to expect the same from me!. I favor being clear and true!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it, there`s a beautiful message here!. As a matter fact 2 messages here!. If only people could see what we see!.
#1)Know God
#2)Be yourself
Don't stop preaching the message, ever!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like the feeling of the first two stanzas!. I stumbled a bit in the third stanza!. Nice though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Flow with Him
And watch tree grow strong roots
Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A sermon would do well with this as the lead!. Said well and obviously from the heart!. Compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
YOU are real, and so is your poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A-ooh'-rah!.!. nice bit of writing!. It was sanctifying!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
straight of the cuff, no bullshit, I like it a lot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com