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Question: Is this poem/drawing good!?
For a 14 year old!?

It whispers from
Her sweaty palm

Enticing promise
Eternal calm

Pressing the cold
Steel to her cheek

Solution to what
She does seek

She argues back
But feebly so

Her mind’s recesses
Already know

Once in a lifetime
For one, you get

Paying back
Her soul’s debt

For a moment
Thoughts cease

Her heart skips
Her love for lease

A fleeting call
Of what was dear

He was nowhere
And yet so near

She hesitates
Dark lashes blink

But suddenly
Begins to sink

Into abyss!.
Her bliss!.

And the picture!.
http://i129!.photobucket!.com/albums/p217/!.!.!.

Rate it out of 10, maybe!? I've been in a poem writing mood!. I drew the picture, and then wrote a quick little poem to accompany it!. I know it's nothing great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
9/10 at least!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Drawing 1, Poem 2!.

Why does every little girl, experiencing one of her first tentative thoughts, think she's a poet!.

You know NOTHING about poety or art!. Www@QuestionHome@Com