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Position:Home>Poetry> Grade my poem please?Question: Grade my poem please!? I am the author of my own life
Unfortunately I write in pen I pray every mistake Ive made Will not be made again We all have regrets Whether we admit it or not Believe what you want But its all in your thoughts We all love We all hate You don't have to agree But its nothing to debate We are practically the same No matter the color No matter the race We all need each other So write your words carefully And make sure you think Because we cant erase What is written with inkWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Beautiful wording comes from your heart!. Grade: Perfect 10/10!. I like every paragraph you wrote, especially your last sentences!. I would like to pass this poem to my young niece and my adopted Blind Daughter (she loves poem and read it by listening to Voice Recognition Software)!. Many thanks to your Beautiful Poem!. One nice thing I wish to get from you is your Title for this Poem, Name of this Poem!. Thank You very much again for posting your poem here to share with everyone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love the poem and the sentiments and the very unique pen metaphor; however, I'd like to share with you what a very wise poet told me: "Rhyming is a deceptive little vixen of a literary device!. She is at once everywhere, in the distance gazing at you seductively and waggling her hips!. But once you get closeyou realize that she is horribly misshapen and quite unattractive!. Or so the story normally goes!. Overused and seldom natural in feel, rhyming poetry is what most poets normally think of when they think of poetry!. Sadly, it is extremely difficult to pull off well and still maintain continuity and a natural, balanced feel to your work!." May I suggest writing a non-rhyming free verse version and compare the two!. Awesome job!. Write on!Www@QuestionHome@Com I love this soooo much!. Its so strongly written!. Beautiful!. Keep writing!. You're Blessed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is very good, it started very strong!.!.!.Beautiful!Www@QuestionHome@Com your message is very clear and your style is very modern!.!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com I give your poem a solid "9"; and if I could, I'd write your grade in indelible ink !! Very good !!Www@QuestionHome@Com cuuuuute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it!.!.!.!.Keep writing!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |