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Question: Do you like this poem!? (need answers fast!!)!?
"Prison"
You have to try your best
To fly away from the nest
You can succeed
Soon, you and I will be freed,
From the PRISON they call school
You can reach for the stars
Even for Mars
You can be anything you want
You just have to TRYYYYYYYYWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I kinda like the Rhymes, are you a beginner!?
But i don't really like the idea that school is a prison, seriously!. If you wouldn't have had the chance to go to school you would have no future!.

But the rhymes are nice, you can add after 'From the Prison they call school', 'From the Principal the Fool!!!'
isn't that a good idea!?!?

Bye! I wish you the best success in poetry!
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I like it, instead of: reach for the stars Even Mars, it sounds like you left out a ward, try: You can reach for stars OR even mars!. see!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, since when is prison a nest!.
That ruined it for me from the start!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's alright :)Www@QuestionHome@Com