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Question: Poem making help please!?
if someone can make up a poem about drugs and its effects i would be very gratefull^^Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Now i can feel it in me,
My souls uplifting,
Trying to make sence of my problems,
But this fix aint fixing,
Im taking a step back,
Looking in complete disbelief,
Thought this was the right path,
To get some much needed relief,
But im shocked by this past,
And what the future may hold,
But then i realise,
My soul has already been sold,
As this decision hangs,
Like walking with no shoes,
And shivers go up and down my legs,
Like Samoan tattoos,
Because this state of mind pressure,
Proves to be greater than before,
And this clean start,
Keeps me above the law,
Because my reckless abandon train,
Comes steamily to a hault,
These holes through my aspiration heal,
And wounds remove the salt,
So my recovery begins,
New tracks for this freight,
Where will the world take me!?
!.!. I'll leave it to fate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

speak your feelings they don't have to rhyme! make it slow and soft or hard and rough to create a mood pick a topic!. or soft pick the water for hard pick a tornado!. if you don't want to write it about nature pick something in your everyday life! for drugs and the effects well I think it would depend on what you feel speek the effects in a smooth way
dont do drugs they're not cool
dont do drugs they're gest cruel

how i helped!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi

You didn't mention why you are interested in such a poem, but after reading your User Name I thought you might be needing information regarding drug use/abuse and it consequences!.

Please consider talking to your parents or other relative if you are feeling "desperate", it can help you just to have someone to express yourself to, and they could have ideas and options to help you feel better!.

I looked up some sites for you and found the following one that has contact numbers if you or someone you know needs to talk to someone about a substance problem!.

The National Alcohol and Drug Addiction Treatment Information Center is a drug alcohol addiction treatment website, call center and hot line!.

It has lots of information that could help anyone seeking help regarding drug issues!. I've pasted the site below, hope it helps you! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

the taste is warm in my mouth
cold clear; perfect

i swallow, and it feels like fire
burning down inside of me
i feel excited, and dizzy

my mind flies like a lost bird;
no where to land
unable to stand

my hands tingle, they feel useless
but i feel good

then i feel sick
i take a drink to take away the wrong feeling inside
just in a blink
it comes back again

i drain the bottle
fire burns in my stomach
the pain burns my heart
it won't go away
it's there
to stay

next morning my head feels like a rock
a heavy block

but i wanna do it againWww@QuestionHome@Com

Whether your name is Bob, Ted or Keith,
Crystal Meth will rot out your teeth!.

If you smoke pot or do any other drugs,
you'll end up on skid row with the other thugs!.

If you smoke crack you will become a louse,
and end up in rehab like Amy winehouse!.

So stay away from drugs and play some sports,
or else I'm gonna kick you in the seat of your shorts!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Drugs Make me feel Good
Drugs Make me look Good
Drugs Should be Good
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I cant vote cause new to this, but I liked "snotty degenerate's" poemWww@QuestionHome@Com