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Question: Finish, improve, rewrite this poem or make a new one with the same concept oh and include feedback!?
Today i decided to piss someone off
and in exchange was flipped off
they also suggested that i die
so i thought maybe i should or atleast would try
but then i thought how!? !.!.perhaps suicide
but as soon as the answer had come to my head
another question had revealed itself instead
who knows how to kill whats already dead!?!


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Time is the rain drizzling down from the sky
Today someone suggested that I am to die
They were my reason, my soul, my mount
I had no one else, now more than ever I don't count
I sat in the road, one car came; it was too late to shout
It was horrible, that night when Time had a drought
In pain I sat, I found myself asking me this instead
How do you kill someone who is already dead!?


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