What do you think of this 2 minute poem?

Question: What do you think of this 2 minute poem!?

Far Apart
by C!.S!. Scotkin

What conspiracy of these Fates
weaves our threads so far apart!?

Warp and weft, we are at the whim
of those makers shuttles!.

Our threads cross too seldom,
destined to be accent lines only,

on our linen shrouds!.

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30 seconds and twice read again !.!. I like it !Www@QuestionHome@Com

I plead the mercy
of Lachesis,

weave me in with those
who understand

the patterns of your
thread,

before greedy Atropos
bares her scissors!.

Fortunately, that prayer has been answered!. This is a beautiful poem, and quite possibly the deepest 2 minutes I have ever seen!. Thanks for sharing, thanks for being part of the virtual family!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Since U changed Ur avatar Ur ideas have become deeper & deeper into the (sound) philosophical analogies, making use of the light & shadow contrast in almost all aspects of life including ( Laundries)!. This 2 minutes poem draws an intellectual picture that could be expressed in 20 lines w/o getting to the point!. I can't place more than a star on the chest of Ur poem!.Do accept it !Www@QuestionHome@Com

As the Carpenters once sang "weave only just begun!.!.!.!.to live" so speaking of shrouds so soon is a lil premature!.

But you do spin a good poem, for a two minute yarn!. Thanks CS!.

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A quandary of emotional highlights that flattened the left side of my brain placing me in an unbalanced emotional state!. I need to eat lots of chocolate to reboot!.!.!.exit stage right!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's the deepest two minutes of thoughts I have seen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best two-minute poem on the board!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is up there!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com