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Question: Another poem I wrote!. Perhaps a bit dark, but!.!.!.!?
If remorse could paint a picture,
I wonder, would it be
a wilted flower, dying-
or all humanity!?
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Ok, I'll try to interpret it from my perspective, remorse is regret!.!.!.so if we could paint regret, the question is would it be a wilted dying flower or all humanity!.!.!.well I think that the flower and all humanity is the same, both part of a lifecycle as is everything in the universe!.!.!.evolution and all!.!.!.and the thing about remorse/regret is!.!.!. it, in itself can serve as the instigator of a new birth!.!.a new idea, an action etc; The other day I asked myself this very question and came to the conclusion that whenever something horrible occurs, I have this empty space in me!.!.!. a loss and often times I have to struggle to find a new embankment to plunge into to fill that loss with!. I guess that's where the term "Neccessity is the mother of all invention" came from!.
I like your poem though, it offers an important question and reflection!. Speaking for myself, I love being alive and discovering the depths of life & society with all its delight and deprivation, simply because I exist & get to try before I inevitably die!.
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