A (Sort of) new poem. Whatcha think?

Question: A (Sort of) new poem!. Whatcha think!?

I wanted to write a song for you
the other day-
something sweet and simple
that would take your breath away!.
And yet, you've left me speechless-
what can I say!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think its cute & playful!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

the only lines that i liked where:

something sweet and simple
that would take your breath away!.

the rest where just horrible awkward!.!.!.!. and bad and i really dont even think that is a poem in the first place and i mean this all in the nices ways and im not trying to be mean or anything but i didnt like it and i think only the 4 who answered liked it now dont blam me if you get mad at me but your the one who asked what i thought about the "A (Sort of) new poem!." well anyway have a great summer and a great day!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked the poem until it came to the last two sentences!. Just sounds awkward with them there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!. It sounds like a sweet romance poem!. 10/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

umm i dont really read any poems but i'd give it 7/10Www@QuestionHome@Com