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Question: Is this poem i wrote for my gf good!?
Ive stolen countless breaths
from this world i am living in
this journey I'm on
i did not consent too
and i have not embraced
or even bothered to taste
the sweet aroma of meaning
i stumbled upon you accidentally
i was not in search of you
i was in search of me
but everything changed
when i looked into your eyes
elusive and transparent
i could see the depths of your heart
and for a split second
i forgot to breath
and at the same time as yours
my heart skipped a beat
your beauty was overwhelming
instantaneous love out of a dream
an angel had lifted me off of my feet
words don't do justice to the beauty i saw
her beauty and grace left my heart in awe
her lips were soft and her voice was sweet
her fingers trembled when they first touched me
our eyes met and i heard her speak
i listened to her and my heart began to weep
god gave me what i was praying for
in the chamber of life you unlocked the door
today was the day i was waiting for
my search for meaning in life was no more

TrevorWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
yes trevor it would mean the world to her,she will never forget how you spoke those words to her,its special have you given her it,nice one,it shows you have a heart,aswell as a brain!.,peAce!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is sweet because it has meaning and it shows you care Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that is a beautiful poem, and I like the fact that most of it doesn't rhyme!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its a wonderful poem
i think you gf will enjoy it!!
You should keep writng
Hope I helped


- ? Taylor ?Www@QuestionHome@Com