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Question: Rate my poem!.!.!.!? (10 points) !?
Well i wrote this quick little poem and i want you guys to rate it from a 1-10 and give me some feedback!. I just wrote it, it doesn't reflect me!. So tell me what you think

Who Am I!?

Who am I
I can not answer that
What am I here for
to be someone in this life
or to be no one
I recall my childhood
When i was a joyful, precious little girl
but now I am an angry, envious girl
I look in the mirror
and i see confusion
A shy, insecure girl
wondering whether to live or not
Asking herself
who cares if she is not alive
So I ask myself
Who am I
I do not know

Best answer gets 10 points!
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
8!.
Cliche, but written in an interesting way!.
Could use stanza structure and metering!. Www@QuestionHome@Com