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Question: My poem 'Reset' what do you think!? !?
What do you think of this poem i wrote!? !?
what do you think of this poem i wrote today!? be sure to check my other poems in my yahoo answers section if you liked this 1!. thanks !!

Reset

Don't be afraid to go back in time and see the life you lived!.

Artificial smiles in a world stained with pain!.

People you trusted,

You deemed as your friends!.

Only later they were icing on a cake!.

No one's understood you!.

A book by its cover,

They threw you away!.

Your heart's vulnerable,

Breaking to pieces day-after-day!.

Don't give up!.

It's not the end!.

When everyone's turned their backs on you,

Know I'll be always there for you 'til the end!.

Like shadows that never fade,

It's inevitable for your angel not to walk away!.

So don't look down!.

Just take my hand and I'll kill away the pain!.

I'll do all that I can to help you shine bright once again!.

Through death and hell,

I'll forever be your friend!.

On a bed of nails,

We won't turn pale!.

Don't give up!.

It's not the end!.

Six feet under,

My heart won't mend!.

Everything that has an ending has a beginning in the end!.

It's not the other way around!.

So turn around, my dear,

'Cause it's time to leave our mark!.

It's the series finale of what had been!.

Two will become One!.

One will leave a legacy for the world to learn its inconsistencies!.

Let's hit the reset and see the bliss tonight!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
really very very beautiful!.!. i love your theme, language and rhyme!. !. !.the feeling is deep and the language is strong Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's pretty kick ***!.!. love your work!.!. i won't go read more now but remind me or something by email and i will!.!. i really like this but i forget a lot!.!. byeWww@QuestionHome@Com