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Question: If a leaf falls in the water, does anyone listen!?
Silent Leaf

A leaf falls to the ground
Not making a sound
Startling me


I raise my head above it all
Downcast views
Illuminate my world
Yet I’m missing something

Someone
Somewhere to share the moments
To spare me from solitude
Erase the black moods

Begging one more sip of life
Lose grip of the knife
Plunged in my heart
Draining my essence
Making room for another

To love me

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Look up from your still leaf and imagine the strength it required for that mighty tree to let it go!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are definitely not out of your tree today HP! Stay grounded and connected and the falling will not have been in vane!.

There is life everywhere - you are not alone!. It is hard when a really great moment happens and you are the only one to witness it!. I get where you are man!.
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that's good but not gripping enough!. use more emotive and effective language such as "dark shadows" instead of "black moods" but overall it's goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

Nice discription of the circle of life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We love you, we love you!.We share your poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

well written, filled with yearning!.!.!.mona lisa smilesWww@QuestionHome@Com