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Question: Do you like my poem "Poor Man's Tale"!? Do you have any other title suggestions!?
I walked along, retraced my steps, years back an infant I was,
to see myself, so young and small, as a baby just because!.
On a hill, forgotten, without loving care,
left alone with this dark, sad world to bare!.
With tear stained eyes, mud on my skin,
a starving baby, so fragile and thin!.
I let out sobs and cries of pain,
abandoned by parents filled with shame!.
A wet tear drop leaked from my eye,
just as the tears, as an infant, I had cried!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Maybe it's just a metaphor I'm not understanding but how does that name "Poor Man's Tale" tie in with your poem!. Anyways if I were you I'd call this poem "The Infant" or maybe "The Tears of My Past"!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it!. How about these titles:
Crying Infant
Who I used to be
Mans Tears
Mans Teary Past
Crying Baby Tale
The Man Who Cried
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Fabuloso Poema!. I like it, it's very nice!. I was wondering was it a true story!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it i would name it the Lonely OneWww@QuestionHome@Com