I wrote these haiku`s looking at this picture!.
http://media!.photobucket!.com/image/black!.!.!.Which one sounds best!?
Exhausted bright star
Entranced I'm drawn into your
Mystical black spell!.
Baby blues passed on
You're in heaven now afloat
Death the beginning
?8/14/08
Prying blue devils
Soar swiftly by heavens gate
Aiding Psychics lies
?8/17/08
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The first achieves more poetically by trying less hard, so I will pick that!. Sometimes, we thwart ourselves by trying too hard!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think the first two are the strongest!.!.!.the pictures in the link you provided are stunning!. You captured the nova feeling really well with your second!. Good work, good amerikus!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I kind of like the third one the best!. The other ones just seem more like a mess of words rather than poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like them all! especially the 2nd one!. :(Www@QuestionHome@Com
i'm still a big fan of the first!. :) that one's got my vote!.Www@QuestionHome@Com