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Question: Metaphorically speaking!. Metaphorically Speaking!? !?
Blue Damselfly Fresh
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I drink dew from the leaf of low lying bush
I fly, intermittently resting!.
I only fly slowly!.!.!.
I’m not in a rush,
My fresh opened wings I am testing!.
The blue in your eyes is
Beckoning me,
Like a shimmering, wanton Light!.
I glide through the air
Smoothly intently
Closer!.!.!. Intent on the sight!.
When you notice!.!.!. I dash off in fright!.
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I found this adorable! I loved that you spoke in first person and took us on the flight, right up to dashing off in fright!
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If the female is a damselfly, is the male a dam fly!? Actually, this was very pretty!. Reminds me of looking at the girls in Jr!. HIgh, but expressed in mature language!. good job!. It's a 9 and a half!. peaceWww@QuestionHome@Com
I like your metaphors, the poem flows, very nice imagery, very nice poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
blue damselfly!.!.interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Like a moth to the flame
star adverse to fame
action before blame
I fear the essence
of my name
Very nice !.!.!.!.!. I was there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Is this about the Olympics!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
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is this about George Bush!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Are you funny again !?!. xDWww@QuestionHome@Com
I like that peom it's good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
very nice
in made me think! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com