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Traveling through the dark I found a deer
dead on the edge of the Wilson River road!.
It is usually best to roll them into the canyon:
that road is narrow; to swerve might make more dead!.

By glow of the tail-light I stumbled back of the car
and stood by the heap, a doe, a recent killing;
she had stiffened already, almost cold!.
I dragged her off; she was large in the belly!.

My fingers touching her side brought me the reason—
her side was warm; her fawn lay there waiting,
alive, still, never to be born!.
Beside that mountain road I hesitated!.

The car aimed ahead its lowered parking lights;
under the hood purred the steady engine!.
I stood in the glare of the warm exhaust turning red;
around our group I could hear the wilderness listen!.

I thought hard for us all—my only swerving—,
then pushed her over the edge into the river!.

—William Stafford

Do you!? What are your thoughts on it!?
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like the poem, too!. I love William Stafford's work -- especially his use of unique imagery and the way he builds suspense in poems like this one!.

In this poem, I especially like the way he describes the wilderness "listening" to the car engine (and, I'm sure, "listening" for what Stafford's speaker will do with the pregnant deer)!. It must've been a hard decision for the speaker to throw the dead deer and her unborn baby into the river, and he'll probably be haunted by it forever!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

well i couldnt do any better but i didnt think it was too good maybe a 2 out of 5 it seemed a little too much like an amateur but my favoorite part was the middleWww@QuestionHome@Com

sad i would have cut the deer open and let the baby be born Www@QuestionHome@Com