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Question: Hopelessness!.!.!. Give Me A Poem!.!.!.!?
i wanna tell me boyfriend this!.!.!. should i!?

give me a poem
any kind is fine!.!.
give me a poem!.!.!.
just give me a sign
all i want is your love
my soul is crying
give me your love
i feel like dying




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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Paige,

MAN OF WORDS
Give me a dream
Just like yesterday,
Sew me up the seam
And send me on my way
Write me a poem
Something deep defined,
Words I would know them
Keep it on my mind

Something written short and sweet
That will lift me to my feet
Nothing that could be discreet
Where the heavens and earth meet

Poets are so gifted
Tempt the souls of beasts,
Get your spirits lifted
Just to say the least
When my eyes are crying
Sing a song to me,
When I feel like dying
Shout soliloquies

If your world has been devoured
Words are wisdom full of power
This is the moment this is the hour
Bless the brave and strike the coward!



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Well if you want me to be honest, I wouldnt use the last line!. Why would you want a man to feel he has that much power over your heart!? That is just me, I am probably quite a but older than you and your poem sings of a youthful heart!. It isnt too bad and just the right lengthWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes its really beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!. Tell him for sure :)Www@QuestionHome@Com