Poem - A Pensive Saturday - What Do You Think?

Question: Poem - A Pensive Saturday - What Do You Think!?

As I sit here
listening to
Pink Floyd
from some
unknown year
I wonder where
freedom has
relocated
and disappeared

I contemplate
and remember
bygone days
of unchained
give and take
I must awake
this cocoon stage
and face life
before it is
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

How true, my little chrysalis!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.my astonishment at seeing such rare poetic prowess in another does not deter from the fact, nor change my mind concerning the knowledge I have, that your poetry doth not compare I say to the beauty within the cocoon that is soon to become a butterfly!.!.!. a delicate colorful representative of flitting flight!. Your freedom will soon be at its apex in your life, for you will be blessed with the wings to carry you to any place you desire!.

!.!.!. maybe I exaggerated a little bit, but I enjoyed writing this comment!.!.!. much, much, much!.

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Very beautiful poem, Marguerite!. We all must get out of that cocoon and face whatever we've been hiding from at one point or another!. I love this part:

I contemplate
and remember
bygone days
of unchained
give and take
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You're not in a cocoon stage at all!. You're a beautiful butterfly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wrap me tight in a cocoon of love and poetry until the Mars shuttles is ready for lift-off!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The meaning is awesome and the words are good, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A larvae-ly poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The freedom is there on Mars!.
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Stay in the cocoon for a while!. It's Saturday!. It'll be Monday before you know it! ;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely written words of wisdom!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it-simple and eloquentWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well said Marg' its a bit difficult though init!?

I need a kick sometimes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm with Buk on this one!.
I too think I liked it!. You made me smile on an early Saturday morning!.
Thanks!.
:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think I liked it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

love it! awsome poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Come with me and the Poets of Mars; it will happen, I promise you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice Thankyou!.l Enjoyed it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

pretty good ; )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow its really cool !.!. i llove it !.!.

i like the way that it half rhymes !.!.

its great !.!. well done !!Www@QuestionHome@Com