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Life began as the flower does
with a simple seed!.!.!.
The big bang, with its last strength
blew across the universe
seeds!.!.!.
The seed to focus on would be Earth,
here we laid dormant for many,
many years!.
Suddenly though it began to rain,
for thousands and thousands,
millions of years,
with this the oceans opened,
and life began to bloom!.
Simply at first,
much like a seedling,
simple one celled organisms,
floated about!.
This was the few
first hundred years
of life,
but suddenly one seedling,
grew a leaf,
and simple fish were born!.
And here began the game of
cat and mouse,
or perhaps fish and shark!.
Predator and prey stayed simple
for a few thousand years,
but one day a bud was formed!.
One fish thought,
to go were the shark couldn't
and walked on land!.
Here he claimed his stake
and began his family!.
The simple fish were left behind,
but the complicated was left to grow!.
And grow he did,
many generations grew,
many generations died!.
but not without leaving their seeds!.
So was life for a few million years!.!.!.
Soon, the bud opened and layers were
added!.
Life was as complicated as a rose,
not everyone descended for land fish,
not everyone walked,
some could fly,
some could hunt,
some could even disappear!.
Some developed complicated brains
and the ability to choose prey or predator,
so is life now, colorful and complicated
garden!.!.!.
All because life begins as the flower does!.!.!.

The poem above is a rewrite!.
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this is a different poem, but very good!

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