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that renders my puzzle undone an important ingredient lacking as I wait for the rising sun once perfect set now broken one item which cannot be found like toting that proverbial bucket with hole all seeps to the ground I spin around in desperate search reaching for what I do not know that single thing to hold like glue and stop my essence its flow!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You plug it with love, ma,,with lots of love,,Www@QuestionHome@Com Our lives can be as simple as a 20-piece puzzle, or as complex as a 5,000-piece puzzle!. Most of us only manage to fit a few pieces together here and there, and after awhile form whole sections together in a few places!. But one never really sees the whole picture until the entire puzzle is completed!. A few song lyrics come to mind: I've looked under chairs I've looked under tables I've tried to find the key To fifty million fables They call me the seeker I've been searching low and high I wont get to get what Im after Till the day I die -Pete Townshend Www@QuestionHome@Com One feels it as something which has been gouged from inside!. Its' centre; the solar plexus stretching as a void around!. An Emptiness that one imagines a hand will involuntarily reach into to grasp what seems a missing heart!. You feel lighter, as if before a fainting spell, And do not trouble to look around for any arms that will receive you!. It is a kind of wish for the relief of death!. It is a kind of wanting eternal sleep - because a grounding weight which once was there, has been stolen away, while you'd not noticed!Www@QuestionHome@Com Damn that Buk!.!.stoleded my answer (yeah I spelled it wrong!.!.so what!? It's called!.!.'for effect' Yahoo!.!.pfffft!) sigh Words which might have been taken right out of my mouth Ma!. Been spinning so long I don't even get dizzy any more!.!. either that or I'm so dizzy topsy turvey appears normal!. Nicely written Ma!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com beautiful poem ma!. depending on what it is that's missing, i will either feel a deep sadness or i will replace it!. let me know if you ever find that substance that holds like glue!. i could use some before all my essence seeps out!. Www@QuestionHome@Com A Piece of me was missing too!. I searched without a clue, Then to my amazement, I found it, yes it's true!. The part that I was Lacking was very plain to see!. Not a Piece of anything, Just the real me!Www@QuestionHome@Com I feel that way about my missing pot lid!. Ma, it's my favorite pot and my kids lost the lid!. I have to go to Miami to get another on like it!. I just don't want to do it!. I hate leaving the country!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is time that flows and we cannot capture it or hold it back!. Thanks for the poem, it was thought provoking and beautifully worded!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i had a dog i rescued one time that barked at me to let me know that i had dropped a sock while i was taking the clothes off the line!. i miss that dog!. love the poemWww@QuestionHome@Com Very good Ma!. Well i go nuts till i find it!. Like yesterday was searching for a missing mouse(PC mouse) and i finally found!. If it had been a snake i would of gotten bitten!.Www@QuestionHome@Com He had 99 & was missing one!. They were left to find that missing!. Because all was worthless without the missing one!. Knowing this in advance makes me love all my ones I have every day!. Peace, Www@QuestionHome@Com I love your poem!. It reminds me of the style that I write in!. Just more advanced!.Www@QuestionHome@Com These lives of ours flow no matter what we do, and your flow, Ma enriches all of us who read your works!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Can't find that coffee cup, ma!? Or did someone break it!? I can lend you one of my old mugs until you get another one!. Www@QuestionHome@Com It's gotta be coffee!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Um, it's lost!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com Wow! Ma, What great words!. Take care!. Love ya Lots!. (((Hugs)))Www@QuestionHome@Com hmmm!.!.!.!.what is it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com I perfectly lost my words !!Www@QuestionHome@Com |