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Question: Another poem of thought provoking material!?
You
Replenish me
Like a cool breeze
In a scorching summer
Giving me nourishment
Giving me laughter
Showing graceful
Mercy and love
That is given
Freely, yet
Lovingly

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All I can say is refreshingly beautiful and yes I do like this much, really enjoy your artful ways with words! Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not especially thought provoking material!. What is the title!?

You have a beautifully shaped poem; and the words are fresh, no cliche's -- YEAH!
I like it!.
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mines better

ahem!.!.!.

You
refuel me
like a car
at a gas station
pumping me gas
the premium kind
joy and harmony
you give to me
expensively
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Nice!. Well structured!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

make it sing in the wind!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com