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Question: A short poem of ponder evoking quality!?
It is known to cover flesh like sweat
Leaving an odor like plaque stained teeth
Yet it is not detected by human nostrils
Nay
The smell rises and irritates the very nostrils of God
Only His Power can overcome the stench of sinWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
heavy, my friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it looms yet it blooms
man loathes it and yet nourishing it
soon the fires of hell
will cast a fire of cold
heavier than a void
and soon!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.man will cry the heaviest of tears!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.and will succumb to a painful regret!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very strong, makes you wonder why God would put up with it!.
Though some are filtered through the precious blood of the Lamb!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry this one does not wet my appetite! Not that isn't well written mind you! Was about to eat a snack, and thought not, so you did move me!
Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com