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Question: A new poem! Something better than love poetry!.!.!.=D!.!.!.please tell me what you think!!?
Take the time
pull it away from life!.!.!.
Someday though the years
will catch up!.
It will seep way down to the bones!.
Feel the ticking of the clock,
feel it shake your core,
let the ticking become the song
of your daemons
of your fears!.
Wake up one morning,
look in the mirror
see your age
see your alter ego!.
Someday vanity will catch up
with you,
someday the sins will find you!.
That day you won't feel so proud!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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that was good!!! i like how you said this "Wake up one morning, look in the mirror see your age see your alter ego"
That is a verrrry strong message!. Great way to express guilt and I applaud you for that!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't find much to praise here, although it is better than much of what people submit!. Mediocre, but okay!.

thanks for asking for my opinion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.!.Um, one of the better poems I've read on this site!. Seriously!. I like the way you block out phrases to make rhythmic accents!.!.!.I like it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

weirdddd!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is good!Www@QuestionHome@Com