Isnt this a cute poem?

Question: Isnt this a cute poem!?

My forgetter's getting better,
But my rememberer is broke
To you that may seem funny
But, to me, that is no joke

For when I'm 'here' I'm wondering If I really should be 'there'
And, when I try to think it through,
I haven't got a prayer!

Oft times I walk into a room,
Say 'what am I here for!?'
I wrack my brain, but all in vain!
A zero, is my score!.

At times I put something away
Where it is safe, but, Gee!
The person it is safest from
Is, generally, me!

When shopping I may see someone,
Say 'Hi' and have a chat,
Then, when the person walks away
I ask myself, 'who the heck was that!?'

Yes, my forgetter's getting better
While my remem berer is broke,
And it's driving me plumb crazy
And that isn't any joke!.

CAN YOU RELATE!?!? !? Please send this to everyone you know

because I DON'T REMEMBER WHO I SENT THIS TO!

Sorry i wasnt the genius who wrote this wish i was!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i am getting that way with all that goes around me these days!. cute one!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it is a cute little diddle!.
Reminds me of a piece written by a sixth/seventh grader, who is not familiar with skills in writing!.
The grammar, spelling and punctuation, indicates to me this piece is written by an amateur!.

Since you, yourself claim that you did not write this, and know not the author who did; it would be illegal for me to share and forward it, especially since you did not post that this was written by “Anonymous”!.

It is unfair for me to critique a piece not posted by the author!.

Sam

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its really cute!. i think that in the second to last stanza you should change ''i ask myself'' to ''i wonder''!. and also if you change it to ''i wonder'' you would have to change ''who the heck was that!?'' to ''who was that!?'' but its really cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it is a very cute poem!.
Fix stanza two so that there is a line break after "wonderin'" and it will fit your pattern better!.

In the last stanza you have a space between m & b in rememberer

It is really a cool poem!. Laughing at forgeting!. I love it!.
T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it's cute, Kitty!
Thank the good Lord, I'm not QUITE there yet!

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that poem describes me to a tee!.!.!.!.its just a relief to know I'm not alone!.!.!.thank you !.!.!.!.!.who ever you are!.!.!.!.!.for whatever i read!.!.!.who the hell am i !?!.!.!.oh yes!.!.!.seamanab xWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol, that is kinda cute!. I do that all the time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

pre- Alzheimer's!? I was going to say something nice but I forgot!.!.!.!.

that's me to the tee, Www@QuestionHome@Com

I can totally relate!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think I like it!.!.!.!.!.hmmm maybe not

I don't rememberWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, Hon!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yehWww@QuestionHome@Com

i liked it kittyWww@QuestionHome@Com