On the edge of the earth, been there sense birth
Just trying to fall off, A soft and gentle push is all I need
Falling isn't bad it's to be free
BY CARL WALKERWww@QuestionHome@Com
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Just trying to fall off, A soft and gentle push is all I need Falling isn't bad it's to be free BY CARL WALKERWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I really really really like this!. It's short but has meaning!. Btw you are a terrible speller LOL, do you like this "pome!?" wow!. its POEM!. and the first line, should it be "been there SINCE birth!?" and why do you capitalize "A" in the second line!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Sort of confusing the readers!. I, personally, don't like it!. Maybe it has a deeper meaning but I can't figure it out and that's why I don't like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think this is a beautifully short but sweet way to say you want to die!. I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I guess its ok if you think it is ,but I guess I like it Www@QuestionHome@Com |