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Question: Please comment/interpret my poem 'Ogre'!. It would mean alot!. Thanks!.!?
Ogre


It's so familiar and ancient
Strong pyramids of deterioration!.
Can you read the bleeding scripture!?
Follow the clues, then dig up a grave or two!?

The keys collapse,
in your tender hands!.
I abuse them dearly,
wait to eat the rust!.

This is how I bathe,
in a bucket of vomit!.
I swear, you're precious!.
And not invited here!.

Turn the other side!.
Stare at my back!.
It's what you can see!.
All I have to show!.

I cover you,
with a borrowed angel wing,
from a child in 1999!.
I hide from an ogre,
that happens to be me!.!.
that happens to love you!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is confused, relatively unstructured, with faulty imagery ("strong pyramids of deterioration" "eat the rust" "ogre that happens to be me") gratuitous filth (" bathe in a bucket of vomit")!. Mostly though, it is pointless, with a senseless attempt at some sort of message!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ummmmmm, sorta weird and gross!. bathe in a bucket of vomit!!?!!?! that is just disgusting!. and eating rust, borrowed angel wing, and why would you want to dig up a grave or two!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com