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Position:Home>Poetry> Would you please turn the light on?Question: Would you please turn the light on!? Black Light It's dark in here I like it this way It's dark in here Please let me stay For in this mode where light doesn't shine I can keep to myself these thoughts that I find Safe and free from pestering eyes Allowing me to keep my disguise Here alone I sit, stew and simmer Surfacing never not for even a glimmer Of the light that blinds me the light that reminds me the light that confines me the light that unwinds me where you can see me torn and unraveled where you can see tortured trails I have traveled where you can see me distorted disheveled where you can see my foundation unleveled It’s dark in here I like it this way It’s dark in here Please let me stay ?rad080408 Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Mushroom Tea (a freind's advise) Water water everywhere!. Water water in my hair!. Shake your head, the mushroom said, As he sat in my favorite chair It's time to heal It's time to deal The fungus said to me I plucked him up, put him in a pot and boiled water for my tea!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's dark in here, don't go away!. It's dark, I'm scared, but I'll let you stay to see a heart so marred, so scarred, a void inside held down and barred, and words can offer comforts few, a single simple touch will do please light the way It's dark in here, Let's face the day, I'm with you dear!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Your poem made me think of a flower seed just punched into the soil!. So happy and quite content it is to stay in the dark, satisfied!. But with water and light, it forms and reaches the surface, blossoming into a splendid stalk of bloom!.!.!.!. and it looks at itself in full astonishment and thinks now THIS is what I was meant to be! Why did I want to stay!? ma Www@QuestionHome@Com If you want to be a poet, you cannot stay in the dark!. You must come out into the light of the beauty and power of words!. They may tear away your disguise, but we are not judges!. We are poets!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Shh!.!.!. it's me!.!.!. Bob!. Don't be afraid, you're not alone!. Here!.!.!. take this flashlight, when you want to use it turn the crank for a minute, I have another one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I have felt this way!. The dark can be comforting, for we face no one but ourselves!. Eventually, however, light arrives, and we must make our peace!. Thought filled poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Black, blackness, bleak, blackness comforting, consoling, cooling!.!.!. calling me, wanting me, I go Www@QuestionHome@Com With luck the light will be a candle and not a train!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Your Poem is very nice!. It shows a great deal of human emotion!. You've been able to capture those emotions very well in this poem!. I really like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com to paraphrase something I heard in church all my churchgoing life, "Let your light so shine before us all, that we may see your good works, in wonder and thanks"Www@QuestionHome@Com That was truly beautiful!. Thanks for sharing!.=*}Www@QuestionHome@Com When it's dark enough the stars will be seen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com If it's darkness you admire Are you a vampire!? Is this just satire!? You stroking my ire!? Your writing burns like fire It's every poets desire To put classic odes on the wireWww@QuestionHome@Com nice poemWww@QuestionHome@Com |