Limerick #1
By C!.S!. Scotkin
There once was a gal on an island
Who liked to cry out on a pilin’
Watch tides in and out
Till she gave a shout,
“My ship’s come in at last” and she’s smilin’
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By C!.S!. Scotkin There once was a gal on an island Who liked to cry out on a pilin’ Watch tides in and out Till she gave a shout, “My ship’s come in at last” and she’s smilin’ Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: There is not enough talk of sex!.!.!. sorry!.!.!. it is the only kind of limericks I know!.!.!. Not one mention of Nantucket, the port all seamen go!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I am not sure what a "pilin' " is but I would imagine a pylon would be something by the sea she may sit on and cry!. (am I being regional again!?) * pilin' for me is another medical term!. :-) Otherwise it's a really good limerick arrgh to be shore to be shore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com im loving how your exploring so many avenues of writing, and while i will always love the man from nantucket, i like this G rated limerick!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com So close!. "Pylon" would work in L2!. And the last line is too long!. "Her ship has come in and she's smilin" Www@QuestionHome@Com Of all the delightful images created here, one stood out more than the rest!. Yelling at me!. Screaming to me!. Alerting me!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Limerick # 1 That can only mean there will be more!.!.!.!.!.!.I'm baiting my breath!.!.!.!.!.GMWww@QuestionHome@Com Let's all lift our glass in a toast To this lady who lives near the coast She's smart and she's funny Her poems bright and sunny And friend, that's a fact, not a boast!! hurrah!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Arrrrrrgh, me matey! Aye, this be sea-worthy indeed!. In fact, I might just load it on me boat and sail away with it! Avast!Www@QuestionHome@Com It works!. Www@QuestionHome@Com |