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Question: Can you love too deeply!?
"Agape Love" (pronounced ah-gah-pay) - the Greek word

You can cry
your tears,
dear!.
I will save them;
string them
on a necklace
for to me
they mean love,
not shame!.

Your heart hurts,
I sense
the mirrored ache!.
Don't you know!.!.!.

I need you too!.

If you leave,
it isn't runningt,
not some
deep buried,
multi-layered
psychosis!.

You need never
apologize
for your humanity!.

You already have
my heart!.
If you need to,

you may break it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This speaks volumes about willingness to help your love bear all burdens at all costs!. Even to the very doorsteps of your own heart break!. Brilliant! Dare I say even superior!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Can you love too deeply!? Yes, if the love is not returned!. Now, for your poem!. I very much enjoyed it and your classic style of writing!. You've concentrated on structure so much recently that I've missed this style!. Anyhow, I especially liked the image of stringing tears on a necklace!. Lovely write as always!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great job, you should really submit it to http://www!.papertank!.com and see what they think!.

I bet you could get a high rating for it on there!Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!. When you love too deeply, then it overflows to others!. Our cup runneth over!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

idk!.!.
but it doesnt get any better than this!.


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wow the end was AMAZING!!!!!! i love it
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