I have a poem, comments please.?

Question: I have a poem, comments please!.!?

Tuff Man
Nice Horse

Strong Hands
Sexy Voice

Full of Confidence
Having Fun

Working Hard
Till Day Is Done

No Need to Remind Me
We are Worlds Apart

But to Me you are a Champion
You Stole my Heart

Tuff Man
Nice Horse

Did I Fall In Love
Hell Yeah Of CourseWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Great job, you should really submit it to http://www!.papertank!.com and see what they think!

I bet you could get a high rating for it on there!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Honestly it's not bad except for two things I didn't personally like
1!.Writting tuff instead of tough
2!.The ending "Hell yeah" I dont know i think you started of well and then the ending wasnt as good!.!.!.
Keep it up though!.!.
P!.S this is just if this is indeed meant to be a poem!.
As a song I think its really good!.
As a poem its alright!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounded like a rhythm for a song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Doggerel!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the rhythm!.Www@QuestionHome@Com