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Question: Another poem about my friend who passed away!? (tell me what you think)!?
Through the good times and the bad
and all the laughs that we had
through the tear drops that fell
like rain crashing down
for every kiss and every word
for every time we almost drown
for every smile
for every frown
would you cry
if you looked down!?
through all the fun times
through the storm and the rain
for all the bad times
that seemed to be the same
for every time
we almost forgot
for the future
tha we can't share
because before your death
you were the only one to care
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I strongly strongly like this poem!.!.
My favorite part is "Would you cry if you looked down!?"
Great job!
I write poetry too and I dont have the guts to display it on here cause I think nobody will like it!. But this is amazing !!
Casey*Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful and heartbreaking!.
I'm so sorry for your loss, sweetie!.
Wonderful poem, almost made me cry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great job, you should really submit it to http://www!.papertank!.com and see what they think!.
I bet you could get a high rating for it on there!Www@QuestionHome@Com
im sorry about your friend!.!.!. =(
but that was amazing!. your friend would be proud!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow, that is really good!.
Amazing :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm sorry for your loss!.
This is a very beautiful poem, I think you're friend would be very proud of this
*hugs*Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow, this is really really good!.
I seriously got chills!Www@QuestionHome@Com