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Question: Ok new poem tell me what you think
A broken heart torn in two pieces
one piece for you the other for me
now grab both pieces and i'll grab the needle and thread
and we'll sew it back together again
grab it tight and don't let go if you do they will fall apart once more
don't worry just pick it up
dust it off give it a kiss to soothe the pain
there! see all better
now where off once more grab it tight and don't let
go, oh no! you dropped it once more, my dear
that is it! twice is to much
you've torn it again
No! leave it there now
pass it back to me
enough is enough twice was to many for me
I'll sew it myself and mend the wounds
go no please go for
i can not beer to see you anymore
if i do my heart feels sore
a reminder of the damage you've done
i have sewed it back up
in time it will heal but the scar will remain
twice was to many for this heart of mine

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
me not like kissing weird heart meal!. but story good!. me think you try more pomes!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's alright!.Www@QuestionHome@Com