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Question: How do you like my Poem!? !?
You think I'm a indignant Savior's
You been to so manny places, I guess that must be so!.
But still I can not see!. Why the saviors one is me!?
How can there be so much that you don't know!
You don't know!.

You think you walk on whatever land you land on!.
The earth is just a dead thing you can clam!.
But I know every rock, tree and Cherise
Has a light, has a spirit, has a name!.

Come run the hidden pine trees of the fosters
Come taste the warm springs of the water
Come roll in all the richest all around you
And for ones never wonder what they where!.

The rain and the storm are my brothers!.
The hair and loanwords are my friends!.
And we all contended with each other!.
In a circle, that never ends!.

You can own the earth and still
or you wont get to there near!.
Can you hear the voices of the wind!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
cool
like it
keep writing


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It would make more sense to use them as lyrics!. Spell check too!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah i like it!.!.!.!.!.good job!!.!.!.!.;DWww@QuestionHome@Com