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Question: Is it time to 'lighten' the load!?
Pity Pot

I took a dump today
on my very own pity pot
did feel very good though!.
Sometimes you gotta let it go!

Dumped lots of crap today
in my very own dumping pot
felt real good, lighter too!.
Sometimes you need to light a match!

And dumped some ‘friends’ today
broom’d them out the door, rid them all
moving… no time to waste!.
Sometimes…well they can have the pot!

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I am at a loss for words! other then, you do not miss a thing!
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I have a pitiful pity pot -it's time
the contents were thrown away!.

I found myself in tears to-day
And Hydropro was the direct cause!
I wept for a brother who wasn't to be!.
And experienced true remorse!.
Though it was long before I was born
I still missed his not being there
Life can be a ***** sometimes
Irrational, unjust and unfair!.

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Gastritis can hit the brain,heart and soul, sometimes it is just good to get rid of it!.Just ask J!.C!.Scott she knows all about this subject!.Lightening the load can do wonders!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

when you gotta go, you gotta go!
sometimes the pity pot works really well!
and nicely written poem, too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is perfectly fitting today!.!.!.We are in the same process of dumping some so-called friends!.
Thanks for the poopy poem! LOL!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Tears help lighten the load too!. When shed, there is a release!. Good poem!. Makes me wonder just what you're dumping - lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting use of metaphor, clearing up what it was you "dumped" at the end!.

Isn't inspiration fun!?

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Thanks, That was a nice reminder!.
I needed to be reminded to take that load and dump it!.!.
was truly starting to wear me down!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Have you extra gas
to pour on my past
so i can start at last
creating my new past

I'll bring the Bic!.!.!.lighter that is

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Find a foe and put the full pot on their head!. They'll REALLY like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com