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Question: Good, Bad, Okay, Horrible!?
I saw a star and named it Jay and everyday I'd wish it's say, Cierra since I saw you smile, since I saw you cry, Cierra I've tried!. Tried to win you over, everyday I've been sober, just so I wouldn't forget you!. Cierra you're beautiful and I want to spend my life by your side, Cierra please accept me, I think I'm suitable!. Cierra youre perfect, Cierra you're worth it, every second of everyday, you're so special in your own little way!. Cierra I love you, Cierra I need you by my side, each and everyday--Cierra you're the girl I need , you're the girl for me, I hope you can see what I see!.!.!.!.but it never does, the star never speaks, I'm in love with this star and nobody else in my galaxy!. So now I might leave, I'll probab;y go far, far away where no one can hear me say, 'I love you Jay!.'
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Definitely good!. Lucky star that you love them so much!.

Only comment to make is try to break it up a little more so that it is easier to read!.

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1st, give it a title!.
2nd, its good!.
3rd, Ur heart was very open throughout the (verse)!.
4th, U made it obvious that U love Ur name, and U have high self esteem!.
Cierra, Ur message was loud and clear, and that is why I said its good!.!. Keep on writing, and share Ur feelings w/ us!.Good luck!
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It's Okay, I'm assuming the writer has not practice at poetry but it's written from the heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com