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Question: Poem!.!.!. Help! Needs something!.!?
I like the direction this is going, but it needs something!. Feedback!? Thanks!.


Second guessing
Hopes and dreams
Never helped anyone
I’ll follow my heart
I’ll listen to my soul
My destiny is calling
But here I stand
Wanting to run
Yet hesitant
I don’t know why
Everything I’ve ever wanted
Is right in front of me
Why is it so hard!?
For me to take
What I want
What I deserve
What is meant for me!?
I need…
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Is it that I need
To hear you say
Go ahead, it's okay!?

or

I need my decision
to be approved by you
Since what I do, I do
For me
And for you, too!.

or

I need only the courage
To take that first step!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

By leaving the last line as it is ("I need…") - you are leaving the "question" open!. It implies that what is needed - is not known at this time - which is okay in my opinion!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

some one to tell me
that they need meWww@QuestionHome@Com