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Question: So i wrote this poem for someone i care about!. please read and rate please!!!!!?
are you the one i waited for
the one who will treat me right
the person who can make me quiver
when you say my name just right
will you be there with me
be there and hold me tight
be with me through tough times
to let me know your by my side
and when i wake each morning
will you be my first sight
and right befor bed
will you be the last to say goodnight
would you kow that your my weakness
the only one who could bring me to my knees
and would you know how to exploit that
that i would only need to hear your sweet voice say please
do you know that when i say i love you
its more than just words coming from me
im saying i cannot resistt ou so its meant to be
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's wonderful, very touching!
I think everyone can relate to it :)
I know I can!.!.!.
Great job!!<3Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!. I wish I was that special person!.

Really, a very nice and well thought out poem, and significant in a literary sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG!!
Thats realy sweet
I think that person will love it!
I no i did!Www@QuestionHome@Com

awww that is sooo cute! id give it a 9!Www@QuestionHome@Com

What a beautiful poem so heart felt i wish I could write like that!. 10 out of 10 well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com