When can you call it yours?

Question: When can you call it yours!?

Not Much Longer

In charge of nothing
I stand unattended
Waiting for salutations

Rewarding myself for surviving
Battles on fields of gray
Matters of the heart
Hard fought and one

Won once
The solace of company
Joy spring of voices
Lifting me to heights
Above the vapid land
That I thrived in

For oh so long
Way too long
It's been too long
Man how I long

Not much longer

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Hope it is yours soon!.!.!.the second and third stanzas are grand and speak to the heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

When you hold it in your Heart,
and lock it with a key,
Where it is safe from harm,
waiting to be set free!.

When you know,
whatever happens,
you will not let go,
and the magic that you feel
is shared with all you know!.

When at last you are together,
then you become as one,
That is how you know,
for sure,
That your Life has just begun!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!.it really speaks to me as well!. I love poems that speak to me,because its oh so hard to forget them,and thats what i like!. =]
I like how it starts hopeless and ends hopeful!. It's very encouraging that when things do get bad,theres always that chance and hope of getting better!.
Great job at writing an Un4getful poem!
Thanks 4 sharing! =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its so scary how your poems speak to me, as if you were writing about me!. I know many others on here feel the same!.

You speak to me!.
Your words own me!.
I salute you!.
I am your #1 fan!.

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Here's to yours!. Now what is yours!? Survival!? the poem!? solace!? the house on the hill!? love!? depression riddance!? Hopefully, not much longer!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you can call it yours when your name is carved in it

her I sit
sad and alone
I cry a bit

stare at the stone

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