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Question: Do you like this, commissioned for a baby shower!? Baby's name is Rose!.
For The New Rose Blooming
by C!.S!. Scotkin
Ring around our newest Rose!.
Shower her with love,
let her know that she is held
by us on earth and those above!.
From this tiny, sweetest Bud,
a glorious Rose shall bloom;
her smile shall lighten all our lives
and chase away all gloom!.
This special Rose of Autumn
is so new, so rare!.
Shower her with wishes true!
Handle her with care!.
Let all rejoice and sing aloud,
this little Bud shall be
a strong and brave and lovely Bloom
upon our family tree!.
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This is GREAT! The family will LOVE it!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
A poem by any other name would surely read as sweet!. This is beautiful, sweet, and fitting!. And you get commissioned for poems!.!.!.I'm glad they appreciate your talent!. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck to little Rose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sappy sweet, but then what else would work!. Liked the 8/6 structure!. L4 of S1 stuck somewhat as I read "by hands she's held here and above!." Overall, very nice and congratulations!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful poem!. She is blessed already for she has you all anticipating her arrival, and praying for her!. May God bless her!. May God bless Rose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is one of those keepsakes given to the mother (In a frame, perhaps) to be shared with her daughter forever!.
I loved it!
Congratulations!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, it certainly will do!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
that's beautiful! i love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
oh *click click click* go the fingers! superb! Bloomin' Marvellous Ducky! Great connection!. They will love it like we do!Www@QuestionHome@Com