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Advice, and Criticism on poem!? What does it mean to you!?
It Is called Dead Letter Child Hood
Have not seen you
In awhile
Lets not make a scene
Smile
You can lean on
In style
We will have fun
Fight of wolverines
Go in time machines
Things will get better
I will be with you
Never grow up
Promise me that
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Grammar: "Childhood", not seperated, "fight off"
I don't understand the verse "You can lean on
In style" Otherwise I really like the concept, maybe a few additional stanzas would make it more comprehensible!. Keep working on it! ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it, its a bit confusing but i really like it it get a 6!.5Www@QuestionHome@Com