Do you like this evening Trigee?

Question: Do you like this evening Trigee!?

Evening Trigee
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Quiet evening……………!.Howling hot sun
falls at last………………!.!.goes down,
but does not break………!.!.sweet silence!.
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Incredible!. I especially like the 'does not break' bit; it's eloquent and fantastically poetic but is also concise and quick!. It touches the essence of what we strive towards in poetry-- something small and soft that is beautiful but does not ask to be loved!.

Anyway, amazing poem!. Write often; there is a deficit of decent poets in this world, and clearly you have a future in writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's Trigee mania! Great Trigee to honor the close of day; and in the spirit of contagion that has infected Y!A this evening, let me say:

At dusk heads bow!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.We close our eyes
And deep we sigh!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.For now at last
The day is done!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.The battle's won!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm with BL on this one but with a tot (or 2) of brandy to warm the cockles of my heart on this very antarctically chilly evening in the South of the globe!. Morning one and y'alls Www@QuestionHome@Com

One of these days I will try one of these, not sure how it would turn out!. I like it, very visual, reminds me of where I am living!. I enjoyed it

I have work up and your opinion is always welcomed and valuedWww@QuestionHome@Com

Noisy evening!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.so much fun
boozy breezes,!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.wonderful smells
blowing in!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.blowing through

You like quiet, I take noisy, together is that a downer/upper!? lol Trigee nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your quiet evening Trigee speaks volumes!
Wonderful!Www@QuestionHome@Com

A great Trigee-----you did write
Tells a story-------about the night
You can feel-------the sweet silence!.

Loved itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sunset and your Trigee, perfect combo!. Bayard Lady, I'll have a glass of wine if you please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Indeed I do! Raising my wine stem in tribute!.
(Now, see!.!.!.it was not that painful!)Www@QuestionHome@Com