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The Bubble in the Belly Blues
by C!.S!. Scotkin

I went to see
Grand baby today
Thought we’d laugh,
Thought we’d play!.
But little girl
just has scowls
first she cries,
then she yowls!.
She’s got the Bubble in the Belly Blues!

I go to her,
Pick Emmy up
will she belch!?,
oh my, Yup!
Grandma’s wearing
her last gulp
No more Bubble in the Belly Blues!

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Projectile Love it's called - feel free to use that as a poem title - it aint copywrit none!. Emmy was just trying to say "I love you Grams" but it was a sorta wet greeting!.!.!.!.!.she will learn!.

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I do recall those days,,, not fondly, but I do recall them!.

This certainly goes a long way to answering the weekend question about anything being off limits for a verse

my answer has not changed,,, noWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's one thing about babies - when they gush - a large quantity can come out very fluently and seemingly without effort ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

aww I love it because I remember my 3 month old nephew and his bubble in the belly blues!. He loves me because I know all the tricks to get those bubbles going up up and away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hopefully, wash and wear!. Cute, metered right and fun to read!. Bubble in the Belly Blues!.!.!.!.great line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bubbles in the belly can make the sweetest child "yowl!." Hope you brought a change of clothes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's very cute and I am so happy little one did not have gas issues!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't think anything is off limits in poetry!. Good poem too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well that's one topic I didn't expect to see a poem on today !.!.!. but I'm glad I did!. Priceless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poor Emmy!
This is adorable as long as you don't visualize what may be on your shirt!Www@QuestionHome@Com