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Question: Have you ever felt like this!?
Overload
by C!.S!. Scotkin


Read poetry till three
words whirling in my head
my synapses moan
very neurons grown
overload!

Emotion takes a stand,
all words now look to rhyme,
blank sheets challenge me
writing becomes free
overload!

Rhythm overcomes,
tympanic keyboard plays;
never to be free,
this new need in me,
overload!.
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C!.S!., I know the feeling all too well, but I've never considered writing a poem about it!. I'm glad you did!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I often feel overloaded by the wonderful world of poetry that we can access here by the internet, or in dusty old tomes read by the flickering firelight with cinnamon and hot chocolate scenting the air!. May my synapses always moan with such ecstasy!. Thank you, C!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

An interesting portrayal of your newly-found poetic experience!. I never feel "overload!." Au contraire, I am often asked to "relax" by the Captain of the ship!.

To me, language and poetry comprise the food of life!. Without them, I am bereft of sustinance!.!.
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Free flowing and good meter - sounds like it was composed in the wee morning - when the tiredness and lack of sleep - let down the resistance to reason - and the creative juices were able to flow unimpeded ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very true, Yes I have felt this way before!. Wishing I could permanately stay in that mode!. For me it was an eight year old birthday party and everyone in my classroom being there!. Pizza and soda ooooh-overload on memory!.
Fantastic!Www@QuestionHome@Com

If you ever catch me reading poetry till three, look for the wine bottle by my side!. I 'ain't' getting overload without some libation!. Plus the wine makes everything rhyme! (Plus, I usually arise by 3:30!) Www@QuestionHome@Com

this sounded more like lyrics than a poem to me [not a bad thing as i think poems are sadly a dying art and songs take their place ] it felt very much like massive attack !.!.!.maybe you would like their music!?

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AWESOME OVERLOAD! (No, I'm not shouting!.)
I have to keep it kind of quiet, if I get too much going on in there it just freezes up!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My Sweet Load! Over and over and over! I like this pattern!. Well done CS!


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