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Night
Every night I went to sleep
I had a dream of which I think!.
Standing near the altar
With friends surrounding me!.
But as I pray
Something dint feel right
Shadows and darkness were coming in!.
Warnings came but we dint listen
Until we saw the real thing,
The dream was turning into something else
Slow it was but it was coming straight
And every night it got worse and worse until it became real!.
Shadows surrounding us
Darkness taking us
And we saw what they can do to us!.
I lost faith on the one I believed
While I saw life’s being taken of the ones I live with
Some hope came,
But it dint last forever!.
One night when I was severely injured
A light came in the window
Waves of sand coming in through them
And I knew I was free!.
Now it’s just a memory
But before that it was a dream,
A dream that started on the night……!.
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