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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think about my poem i wrote it's called *suicide*Question: What do you think about my poem i wrote it's called *suicide* (Suicide)
Fighting Bleeding Screaming wishing no one would see me Pain Blood Stains Cutting the main Vein I think im going insane Depression Sadness unhappyness this is what is causing my madness Suicide Last breath this will be my long painful deathWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Glad your in a better place bro!. It seemed like a good outlet to keep anything like this from happening!. It is better to write it down than it is to actually do it!. As far as the poem goes, I get it, but it is what it is!. It was a way to keep you in check!.!.!.It wasn't a love poem!. It is not going to make you rich!. But, It might have kept you here!. Cool!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Congratulations!! We all have our dark moments and some of us have our words to remember them Writing in the throes of depression is like a catharsis to the mind!. It helps us move out of the darkness and into the light!. Out of the deepest depressions flow some very wonderful pieces of work!. Www@QuestionHome@Com It definitely connects with your emotions, and it also flows well!. It's very good, as good as a poem about suicide can get :D Please read mine too :D http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i think its too dark and depressing and not to be mean but completely honest!.!.it just seems like someone who was pissed off so they wrote down some words on a paperWww@QuestionHome@Com Its not really very good!.!.!. Something like cutting the main vein doesn't really flow Www@QuestionHome@Com good for an edgar allen poeWww@QuestionHome@Com its very nice!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com um!.!.!.!.T_TWww@QuestionHome@Com get helpWww@QuestionHome@Com i thinks its pretty creepy!Www@QuestionHome@Com wow!.!.!.alot of emotions!! R u sure u ok!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |